The Stunning Seasons
By: Cassidy Ravét
Golden leaves
Flutter to the ground
Blanketing the grass
In a blanket of crispy color
Crunch crunch crunch
Stomp across the yard
Dive into a hill of leaves
Laugh all day
Winter soon comes
We’re trapped inside
While a storm is brewing
We wait and wait
The sun is shining
Running, leaping
In our puffy coats
Lay down on the ground
And create a beautiful angel
Out of powdery snow
Snow soon melts
And flowers begin to bloom
Spring has arrived
Playing in the rain
Has never been so fun
Puddle jumping all day long
Heat waves roll through the air
Summer sun shining down
Giving warmth to the city
Sipping lemonade cools me off
As I sit on the beach
Watching family splish and splash
The seasons are so wonderful
With joy and happiness galore
Adding change to our world
And giving us marvel
I enjoyed this poem very much. You have wonderful use of literary elements, that paint a picture in the reader's mind. You feel like you are back visiting each season as you read through the poem. Memmories rush to my mind of jumping in leaves, making snow angels, and swimming on the beach. You have great creative word choice; in example, "While a storm is brewing" brewing was very creative and gives the reader a better picture. Wonderful poem. What inspired you to write this?
ReplyDeleteYour creativity is shown through this amazing poem! I am very impressed! You are a natural. You poem just had a southing flow that made it relaxing. You have many delicate pieces. I enjoyed it and hope you post more. I, like Morgan feel that you had many literary elements and they were not hard to find. What DID inspire you to write this?
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